you might say
Posted on in fem fatale, femdom, humiliation, poetry
… well, a lot of things.
maybe that you fear me
that my erotic sway brings you to your knees
or my voice is all you hear
above the din, beyond the clamor
of what you once mistook for life
that you despair, yet crave all that i am
(you know that i am)
my sharp words
exigent carriage
cavalier inclinations
callous requisitions
that you love me with desperation
(your senseless desperation)
… despite
my cold disdain
contemptuous breadth
my reserved contempt
that you would kneel before me
give to me
sacrifice for me
venerate, cherish, celeberate me
suffer for me
cry, beg, whine, snivel, squirm
humble your undistinguished self
at my feet
or whatever
because i will say
that you are irrelevant
and i am disinterested
that i disdain
your impotent efforts and puny ambitions
that you are
inconsequential, even despicable
that you are …
a paltry wretch
a lacking vassal
a lamed fuck
a stumbling picador
a shadow man
or whatever
October 27th, 2008 11:40 am
Beautifully written as always
xx
October 30th, 2008 2:46 pm
A brilliant poetic, in your face, tribute to my mistress written with artful aplomb by my mistress.
November 4th, 2008 7:25 pm
erotic humiliation in poetry. how wicked. how sublime. how hard i am right now.
November 7th, 2008 3:26 pm
Great blog, great poem. I’m reading and just having one hell of a good time. Thank you so much.
December 20th, 2008 4:46 pm
an ode to my senseless despairing love. perfect.
January 10th, 2009 1:19 am
Beautifully written.
June 5th, 2011 4:05 pm
Amazing. Thank You.